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Post  Zalos Urkaki on Wed May 19, 2010 12:53 am


Name: Zalos Matoro Urkaki
Age: Age of Death and Rebirth is 18
Personality: Zalos is a very tempered person when fighting with others. He mainly remains calm out of fights and doesnt like to frain into fighting. He doesnt say much. Generally here is the throwdown he doesnt enjoy confrontation or people, animals, life, death, good, evil, emotion, reapers, demons, angels, and especially immortals. He's not one to bother if you have any of those traits.
Mortal Appearance: In mortal appearance he dresses in a black business suit and often carries a suitcase(which later turns into a scythe when becoming a Reaper). He has white Long hair often in a ponytail. He has blue eyes but in cases where he is about to change they turn red.
Reaper Appearance: He wears a white reapers cloak and carries a big jagged scythe. He also keeps his hood up in most cases besides when he is about to take a humans life. He often appears as a transparency as a reaper and his eyes go completely white when using Stricken. He keeps red eyes for most time.
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Weapon in Reaper Form: Its it a big jagged scythe, with a white bar amd tinted bronze blade. He also has a series of weapons called the Tora jewels. Each jewel turns into a metallic animal, when fused with the jewel he gains the slight abilities of that animal. The Tora jewels are activated through being slashed by the scythe. Zalos gains one jewel everytime he levels up. These animals he has found are: Bison, Monkey, and a Snake. He has not found: Dragon, Wolf, and Shark
Weapon in Mortal Form: Its a suitcase. The Tora jewels reside as papers within the suitcase
History: Zalos comes from a small city in Rusia known as Boravich. His parents were very wealthy people who worked for the king and pursued alot of investments. Working for the king was not an easy job what so ever., alot of people died for doing so. One drastic day the rebels against the king came to the kingdom(This based around 1800). They killled all the village folks and his whole famil besides him. Instead of killing him, they tied him up and made him watch. A few weeks after this event, he decided he would take on the rebels himself, but in doing so he killed himself, but still managed to kill the rebel leader.

Through and through he fell through the boundries of hell, for commiting sins alike. Eventually he fell into Abel's grasp and was given a choice, either prepare for eternal death or hunt for reaper kind. So, being vengeful he took the offer and used it to his advantage. He used the infinite knowledge to hunt down the men who killed his friends and family, and kill them all breaking reaper code.

For years after that, leading up to the current time he has been hunting souls and avoiding the elder reapers for the code he broke 200 years ago. He also has a taste for hunting decendants of the men who killed his family. He generally walks the earth now to eliminate all who oppose the Urkaki families living descendants today. He also learned information to his friend escaping the whole massacre of his family, so he looks for information based on that whole situation. And many people before being killed, tell him they have saw that man before, trying to kill them.

He has failed to maintain his power by allowing Humans to live. That is where he failed to maintain infinite Reaper pride. He has yet to feel emotion since that day, besides the compasion for human life. He is a soulless being. He has cut many, many chords of life. Here he is today.
Powers: Zalos is able to control metal and fire a furious victory match up. He became a master of his kind
Rp Sample: Zalos walked through the shrouded village knowing his enemy was hidden in the buildings... he followed his scent. He heard a movement from behind him, he quickly turned and one of the descendants moved in on him. "You like to play" Zalos jumped into the air and suspended himself. "Prepare for death" He took his hood off revealing his long wavy silver hair looking into the mans eyes. Chains quickly jumped into the mans body from the ground and tightened. A tear ran dont his cheak "Haha, stricken" The chains quickly pulled into the ground tearing him into peaces and burning as they hit the ground

Name of Power: Stricken
Element: Metal
Effect: Chains rise from out of the ground and hook on to an opponent. They can tighten based on Zalos' will
Range: It is generally close range because Zalos needs direct contact pof the eyes to do it
Limitations: Only able to use it every three posts

Name of Power: Magma Ball
Element: Fire
Effect: Shoots a ball of magma out from his mouth
Range: Far range, depends on energy in him
Limitations: Like once every 2 posts

Name of Power: Killable
Element: Metal
Effect: Metal energy up physical based fighting
Range: ----
Limitations: Only usable for up too three posts and cooldown lasts 3 posts

Name of Power: Iron Hybrid
Element: Metal
Effect: Fuses Zalos with any item made of metal around him(including Morael)
Range: ----
Limitations: Charge is after three posts with minimum energy use, and it lasts 8 posts with a 4 post cooldown



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Post  Fenrir on Wed May 19, 2010 7:46 am

Interesting, though you neither earned that power nor were rewarded it. You must wait until you either earn it in training (not everyone does) or rank up. Also, your tora jewels seem... unorthodox and overpowered. Plus, no weapon on the site grants any powers. Weapons are merely a conductor, a medium if you will. They are used to channel your powers, and nothing else.

You could have EACH tora jewel as ONE power when you level up/train, but you don't randomly get some crazy powers like that out of the blue, man. So, until you level up or something,

DENIED!

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Post  Zalos Urkaki on Wed May 19, 2010 7:49 am

I edited the Tora jewels
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Post  Fenrir on Wed May 19, 2010 7:52 am

My verdict still stands.

Also.. if he gains one every time he levels up, then he has none. Furthermore, if you want those jewels, you get one INSTEAD of learning a new technique every level. I will also need a post describing everything about them, from appearance, to structure, down to the behavior of the animals when not fused and what abilities they give you completely. It will be a lot of work.

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Post  Zalos Urkaki on Wed May 19, 2010 7:56 am

Okay, ill add after school
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Post  Fenrir on Wed May 19, 2010 8:06 am


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